Thursday, October 25, 2007
Reality bites..
Finally.. i was back there after several years.. everything was the same.. except some aging up of the building.. the same old wrought iron gate.. the same old path.. the same old stairs... where i sat hours and hours.. watching the stream of water flow by.. it wasn't exactly a river but a small stream.. i sat at those same steps after so many years.. remembering the good old times.. when life was at peace.. there was plenty of time.. plenty of space.. plenty of bliss..i sat there.. and just looked at the path.. and the farms on both sides of it.. those wheat crops were spread like golden blanket over the whole field.. and the river flowing by at a distance.. pure bliss
I remembered the evenings i sat on the terrace, watching the sun setting at a distance.. the red skies.. the birds flying .. and mountains behind... life is so chill here.. sitting day in n out .. in complete loneliness..when you can be with your own self .. no traffic sounds.. no disturbance nothing.. living here sounds like a dream compared to my Delhi..
Good old times when you don't have to worry about getting up at 7 and running.. you can sleep here until u get tired of sleeping.. get up late.. have breakfast at 11.. and lunch at 4.. read whole newspaper... and all those gossip news.. instead of rushing through few main lines..go strolling in the evening alongside the stream.. those relaxed tinkles of the temple bells..
Temple.. yeah.. i went there again.. in hope of seeing her at the evening aarti.. as usual...had lots of thoughts will she recognize me .. will she be there.. do i even remember the way to temple..
Finally i reached.. n was awestruck .. she was there.. sitting at the mahilayen or the females side ..u know how the things are in Indian villages.. the expression.. the very same expression.. caught me again.. was looking at her again n again through corner of my eye.. caught her eyes sometimes doing same..this went around for some half an hour.. but seems like ages.. the pundit was singing it tooo slowly.. as if he had time till eternity..
Finally it ended.. and we came out.. had to walk quite a distance to lose everyone behind.. din wanted a jungle fire to spread.. then looked slowly towards her.. "finally!, i never thought you would come".."neither did i ".. "so hows your girlfriends".." u never said yes.. so i never had one".. "so".."so".."what" .. " yes or no?".. " is it possible".."mayb".."it wont work".."it will , i think so".." you have to do it again ..".. '" i thot so"..
and then i held her hand.. went on the knees n said it again n again.. though it came very difficultly for the first time.. but then it became like zephyr...
" u still din reply".." u really wanna know ?" .. "hmm",, and then something happened ,, something electrifying.. what i din imagine.. or had no hopes that it will happen..
Fuck Fuck Fuck.. the alarm rang.. Get up u lazy ass... time for office..
hahaha.. dont kick my ass for this please.. was getting bored so thot of irritating people.. lolz...
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18 comments:
oye nalayak! :-/ u almost had me there...hmpf!!
read the whole post thinking u r finally drowning in nostalgia (mere sangad ka asar) and whn it reached tht part, felt "aha, now he is goin to spill out a secret"...until the stupid alarm line...:-/
hmm u sure it was a dream??? :p
You made me Grin on this boring day .thanks :)
i guess nw i kw ur style of writting...i expected such an ending only..
bt yeah..in between...i kinda tht it might b real :P
bt nah..tu meri umeedon mein khara utra munna :D
nice one...
*book*
good one dude...lolz....i thot it was real until....alarm rang...
Oye you are a good story teller yaar...Short stories likhna shuru kardo...and I admit main toh saara sach maan rahi thi aur tune alarm baja diya.
@pri
nopes babes.. it wasnt a dream.. mujhe sach mein pyar ho gaya hai ek gaon ki chori se :D
@sunshine
aint no sunshine wen shes gone...
@asha ji
tujhe bhi ullu bana dia :D
@kp
heheheahahaha
@shruti
story.. ye mere jeevan ki sacchai hai.. (atleast jab tak alarm nahi baja tha :D)
LoL!! Good one! The last part was an awesome kick to the post. :D
Thanks for visiting.
Cheers!
that awesome starting was fictitious??? :(:(:(
Hmmm...you had me smiling again..:)
@sweetsticky
thanx for visiting :)
@zee
almost ;)
@kiddo
:)
u r such a &*%*^%@$^%@&
i fell for it... u so deserve a kick...
Lol.. I thought it was true.. fell for it..From the next time I got to be careful while reading your posts
@fire whiskey
hic... haha..another fool :D
@shalini
lol.. welcome here
funny but typical AK post
haven't disappeared.Just can't make time for myself.
School has reopened.
Waaaaaaa :(
@ashu
:-s means?
@kiddo
hahahaha.. jao jao skool jao :P
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...
mujhe pata tha ki saradr kuch aisa hi karne wala hai..but was touching
tu job shob chhor kahani likh
shit!u r an ASS
god!when i started reading i formulated a comment in my head about nostalgia but the time i reached the end i was so bugged....my u r one big pest! :P
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